Well, you certainly had me in tears at the end! Katie is an interesting character. I connected to her immediately in your story. I spent 11 years as a news anchor for several network affiliates all over the country. The latest was KATU-TV (ABC) here in Portland. Nice job of maintaining the integrity of the industry. Julia |
I got goose bumps reading your novel at the end. Really beautiful story and beautifully written. Andrea |
What a sweet story. I remember pawing frantically through the slips of valentinesin my shoebox mailbox searching for the name of my kindergarten crush. Now I'm going to have to Google him. Bethany |
Your story was quite touching...I was crying at the end, it was so beautiful. Monica |
I liked the story. It reminded me of James Patterson's love story. Dina |
I just finished reading your short story. I really enjoyed it, it was so touching. Alison |
I enjoyed your story - what was your inspiration for it? Jill |
I really enjoyed reading your story. You have an incredible talent forcapturing human emotion! Hayley |
Damn you for making me tear up first thing Monday morning....That was wonderful. Nicholas Sparks, watch out! Elle |
I choked up when I read your short story... Sue |
I read your story, those types are SO popular. Jennifer |
Wow! I can't wait for the book to be out on the shelves! Karin |
That is a fantastic story. Cindy |
I read your story--it seems to me that you certainly have what it takes to write action/adventure--and N. Sparks, too. I like your title. I liked how the story moved and the images were sharp and effective. Also, the story seems like the beginning of a larger story--maybe that's what you intend, maybe not. But all good. Bella |
I read your story and really liked it. Dory |
I read your essay and truly enjoyed it. You are obviously gifted in anumber of ways. Cathleen |
Great story. I read it three times, and you definitely have a way with words. Tracey |
This feels like an incredibly intense thing to tell you, but the parallel between your story and my life is too remarkable to ignore. I'm sure you can see why I am so taken aback by your story, which by the way, I should mention is really well written. Kyle |
Katie is a figure all woman aspire to be, successful, driven, yet never loosing touch with her softer side... can't wait to read more about her! Kelly |
Amazing short story that leaps to the heart and rips it out. Cindy |
I really enjoyed your story. Amazing talent! Rebecca |
Thanks for the Friday afternoon tear jerker.... Amy |
Your story is sooo beautiful!! ...so visual and deep... I can tell you have so much going on in your head! Holly |
Just finished reading, it's terrific!!! Well done. Ann-Marie |
I have to say, that your story really touched me. I was actually able to visualize your characters! Phaedra |
I guess I needed a good cry, huh? Robyn |
It totally drew me in. What a great story. Amy |
You captivated my attention from the very beginning and held on to it until the very end, leaving me with tears spilling from my eyes. DM |